Cartoon World

Description
And so, I stepped beyond reality, and into the world of cartoonery. There, I would find a large open plain, bound in every direction by two dimensional mountainesque structures...and a book on toast.

So, Delta 135 has bore unto us a map depicting a world from a bright and colorful animated world. No one world in particular, just a world. The main area is a wide open plain, which dominated by a bright green texture that you would see in an old Atari game. Spread out upon this plain is a large dual-tower structure for sniping, a treewalk with some shielding items along the path, a small little pond, a nearby ridge, and a dwelling that looks like it could be a wacky scientist's home.

Like any custom creation, there's always a way to make it better, so here be some bugs and or graphical suggestions:

1.) Unifying your theme - Definitely see if you can make or acquire some cartoon tree and grass blade textures/models. Also, I believe a more colorful rebellion decal would suit those sniper towers much more(though they're good as they stand.)

2.) The Pond - I believe the cartoon water texture as is looks a little too patterned, and gives me the impression that a scaly film is upon the water. You could easily just go with a solid light blue texture there, and it'd look great.

3.) The Rocks/Ridge: Like with the pond, I believe a solid texture would benefit these more than the patterned texture you have here.

4.)The House - Upstairs on the bed you have some texture-fighting between the bed and the covers.

There is one other bug that is horribly weird, but not necessarily in need of attention: Firing a DEMP2 alt blast at the windows of the house causes texture fighting between the decal and the window. Oh, the joys of randomly firing weapons everywhere...

So other than the JA trees and grass haunting the area, I'd say this map is well on its way to becoming quite the amusing craftwork. I would also recommend increasing the skybox's boundary so that ships may be flown about, as there is quite a bit of space, more than enough to fly in.

Well, I'm done. What say you?


New Textures: Aye
New Music: Nay
Secrets to plunder: Nay
Bot Support: Nay


- Averus Retruthan