Loaren

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Hmmm... Certainly not a badly made map, by any standards, if you ignore one thing: it's flat.

Most maps have at least some height variation, and that's generally considered a good thing, as it makes gameplay more realistic and enjoyable. In this regard, your map is certainly lacking. Sure, I like a good city fight as much as the next guy, but I don't like a completely flat map with no variation whatsoever in the height.

Besides that, there's one other issue, which I harp on a lot. The textures. Specifically, that sand texture. It just doesn't seem to fit the theme of a destroyed city. You might want to do something about that. Cracked flagstones, carbonized roads - that's a destroyed city. Not sand. Not to mention that looking at that sand texture for too long is like taking your grandfather's WW2-era shaving kit and scraping the dull, rusty razor over your retinas. If you're going to make it sandy, please choose a different sand.

I certainly like the concept, and the map's execution isn't bad, but there's still a lot of work to do here.

-CanadianBorg

P.S. Resistance is futile, eh?