Theme Park

Description
A brief friendly reminder to the author before I begin: [i]Make sure you double check what game you upload to, since it ended up in the JA section and not the JO[/i]

So then, what fun is in store for this theme park? Eh, not too too much, but it's still a good start. My first note when I came into the map was that it was [b]dead silent.[/b] Whilst it's important to not have silent maps period, it's doubly important for a theme park. Those things is noisy O_o! People screaming and talking, rides running and exploding,* games and what not, the whole package, y'know?

Putting the silence aside, there are three attractions: A carousel, a bouncing compound, and a roller coaster. The Carousel was probably the least appealing of the three as the rotation made your player shake. Combine that with very uh...strange horses, and it was just sorta something one would wanna avoid. The bouncy castle is pretty mundane, very bland textures. Feels more like a bouncy prison versus a fun attraction XD and finally, the Roller Coaster, which is essentially a big func_train going on a track. To be honest, this was probably the best attraction, as it was very well scripted and the user could actually make use of it.

So since you intend to make a 2.0, here's my suggestion list:

- Carousel could use some work. Horses at least

- Needs more sound, by far(Cannot stress that enough)

- Better atmosphere than glass box in space

- More fun annoying colors(because this place feels too dull to be a theme park


Other than that, the only thing to mention is that there's one secret. Not too hard to find but it'll give you some decent weaponry. Overall, I'd say this map is a good start for a new mapping career. Just give it s'more time and patience, and I think this could really go somewhere.

RALLY AND BANDWIDTIFY.



New Textures: Nay
New Music: Nay
Secrets to plunder: Aye
Bot Support: Nay


- Averus Retruthan


*explosions only guaranteed in my Graveyard Theme Park