Rhen Var Ravine

Description
modmaster13 is here today with this map, called Rhen Var: Ravine. As the title implies, it is on the snow planet of Rhen Var and features a rather large ravine in the center of the map.

Gameplay takes place at four CPs around the edge of the ravine, which takes up the vast majority of the map and is located at the center. Each side gets one control point at opposing sides of the ravine, with two CPs midway along the other two edges of the ravine. The map is also very big, which means that it can take quite a while to make your way from your start to the opponent\'s start. There\'s some structures at the starting CPs, though there really isn\'t anything in them worth exploring.

Moving onto the suggestions portion of the review; there are a couple things I would suggest. First, make the ravine have a death region, so those who fall will die regardless. Secondly, make it clearer on the minimap where exactly the ravine is, since I fell in after spawning because I didn\'t know where to go. Thirdly, ground a lot of your objects, since there were a lot of floating ones. The buildings were most notable for this, though I noticed some flying CPs too. Fourth, change the sky from Yavin! Fifth, make the map a little smaller, as currently it\'s a bit too big and spread out. It needs to be a little more condensed. Sixth, include some screenshots next time! I took a couple for you, but next time you ought to do it.

Overall, this is a fairly standard first map- an interesting concept, but it has some bugs and needs a little more work to be an enjoyable experience. Give it a download if you so desire, or if the screenshots appeal to you.

-Jedikiller